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The
following are suggestions from the
Colorado State Writing Lab. [Copyright © 1997-2003
Colorado State University] This is an excellent Web Page.
Editing
and proofreading are writing processes different from revising. Editing can
involve extensive rewriting of sentences, but it usually focuses on sentences
or even smaller elements of the text. Proofreading is the very last step
writers go through to be sure that the text is presentable. Proofreading
generally involves only minor changes in spelling and punctuation. This module
presents strategies for editing and for proofreading under the two links
below. Just remember that both editing and proofreading require some practice
before the strategies feel totally comfortable.
Editing Strategies
It's
easiest to approach editing as a multi-step process that starts with sentences
in clusters and moves to smaller elements of the text (e.g., commas and
apostrophes). Generally, you can follow the steps below in the order they're
listed here. But if you know you have trouble with some of the steps, plan to
leave yourself enough time to work through that step more than once before you
turn the paper in or send it to your reader.
Always Think About Your Target Audience
As
you edit, keep in mind the target audience for your writing. If you're writing
about technical information to an audience that isn't technically expert, you
may need to add a step to eliminate or define technical jargon. If you're
writing to an audience of ten-year olds, you'll need to consider sentence
length more carefully than if you're writing to an audience of adults.
Start with Sentences
Ask
yourself these kinds of questions as you look carefully at sentences:
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Do I need to change
sentence punctuation? Because readers find these errors so distracting,
writers should edit separately for sentence punctuation if they have any
problem at all in using periods, semicolons, and commas with coordinating
conjunctions correctly.
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Do I need to combine
sentences for clarity, precision, variation? To answer this question, most
students go through the paper concentrating on one sentence at a time or on
two adjacent sentences. If they see wordy repetition, they combine sentences
to reduce repeated words and phrases. If they see sentences repeatedly
beginning with the subject, they reorder sentence parts. If they see a
phrase that doesn't fit or make sense where it is, they rearrange or
rewrite. Reading the paper aloud often helps writers catch those sentences
that need work.
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Do I see any wordy,
clichéd, or empty sentences I should rewrite?
Consider Words
Think
about the words you've chosen throughout your paper. Do you need to choose
more precise, active words? In some papers, particularly those that express a
personal perspective, you'll want to check for words that create your personal
impression. In persuasive papers, you may want to check for neutral words to
avoid emotionalism. Let the audience and purpose of your paper determine how
much time to spend on this step.
Check Grammatical Details
Don't
forget to look for the major kinds of problems that crop up in student
writing. Use these questions to help you edit for grammatical problems:
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Do I see any errors in
subject-verb agreement?
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Do I see any errors in
pronoun usage?
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Do I switch from present
tense to past tense?
Don't Forget Punctuation and Spelling
This
final list of questions should help you edit for punctuation and other
remaining errors that could distract your readers:
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Have I used commas only
where they belong and can I explain each one I use?
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Have I used apostrophes to
show possession for nouns? Have I used apostrophes to show contractions with
pronouns (if that level of informality is appropriate for your paper)?
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Have I checked for
commonly confused words, such as affect/effect, to make sure I have the
correct one?
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Have I used the spell
checker on my word processor? Have I read the paper again to check for any
misspelled words the checker didn't catch?
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Are there other errors I
know I make that I need to check for?
Proofreading
Strategies
The
"finished" paper always takes effort; sometimes it takes sweat and tears. But
never fear to make major changes during revision or minor changes during
proofreading. The best papers are those that we give our best thoughts to and
those that show we can reject our less-than-best writing.
Proofreading is the very
last step in preparing a final draft. Just because it's the last step, don't
assume that it will go quickly. Sometimes it take two or more additional
"passes" through a paper to be sure you've found all the remaining
typographical errors, misplaced pieces of punctuation, or inaccurate words.
Start with Problem Areas
When
proofreading, look first for those problems you know you have.
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Check all sentences for
completeness first. For instance, many proofreading errors involve using
commas where semicolons are required.
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As a separate proofreading
step, look at each sentence in your final drafts. Check that any commas in
the middle of sentences aren't separating two sentences that could otherwise
stand alone. If you have just a comma between what could be two sentences,
change that to a semicolon.
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Then read the paper again
for each problem area your teachers have suggested you work on. You may have
to look at the paper five or six times to be thorough, so try splitting up
your proofreading.
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Check for sentence
punctuation and one other problem in one sitting, and then come back after a
break to look for other problems.
Read
from the End to the Beginning
The
final product you share should not distract readers with any errors. A good
way to proofread for spelling is to read from right to left, from the bottom
to the top of the page. If you read only from the beginning to the end of the
paper, you may overlook typos. Also, as you discover spelling errors, keep
track of those. You can keep a list of common misspellings taped to the front
inside cover of your dictionary so that you don't have to look up the same
words over and over. Or you can tape short lists of words to several books you
carry with you during the day. Just by glancing at the list from time to time,
you can learn to spell the words correctly.
Look
Just for Typos (even if you use a spell-checker)
Even
after you go through this sequence of steps, don't forget to proofread once
more for typos and spelling errors. As good as today's word processing
programs are in highlighting potential problems in spelling and wording, this
software can't catch certain kinds of errors (such as commonly confused words
like affect and effect). Error-checking can only be done by a careful
proofreader. So take the time to read what you think will be the final
printout just to be sure you've found all the little mistakes.
Proofreading Checklist
Proofread
a paper several times, never just once while the paper is in the typewriter or
just after you finish typing or writing. Here's a short list of steps to go
through to be sure you've proofread your final draft thoroughly.
- Proofread one sentence
at a time, again from the end of the paper to the beginning. Look especially
for sentence punctuation and any errors you know you often make. By looking
at each sentence--because it will be out of context--you'll see more of the
punctuation errors and missing words than you catch by reading from the
beginning to the end of the paper.
- Proofread once more,
looking for problems you know of in your writing. Always make one special
reading just for your common flaws and errors.
- Read the paper aloud.
Sometimes, because you have to read more slowly to read aloud, you'll "hear"
problems that you otherwise miss as you read the paper silently. Pay special
attention to the sound of words (check for endings) and of sentences (check
for choppy sentences that should be combined and for sentence fragments).
- Proofread slowly,
reading each word from right to left and from bottom to top on the page; in
other words, read backwards so that you catch spelling or typing errors. Or
read the entire paper from the end to the beginning. By looking at each
word--because it will be out of context--you'll see more of the spelling
errors than you catch with your current proofreading process.
Final Advice
When
you need to be sure that your final papers are perfect, as you will for an
application to professional school or a job-application letter, you might
still want to find someone to proofread for you. Your proofreading skills will
improve as you practice the steps I've noted above. In the meantime, ask for
help! Take advantage of your campus tutors, writing lab workers, other
students in your class, and most importantly your teacher. Teachers post
office hours on their doors to let students know when they are available for
help. This is a great opportunity for one-on-one help. Some teachers will
even answer e-mail and telephone questions. Show initiative and seek help. |